Very Nice!
The only problem was the overbalanced instrument that first appeared at 0.42. Other than that, it was very nice. I like that tropical feel that I get from it. Unless you planned on looping it or gating it to another song, the ending is kind of missing.
How old are you to this site?
In any case, say hallo to jour new rival!
I got to get back in my own groove. Lately, I've been doing VG covers that aren't that bad. If you have any spare time, go aheed and check it out!